Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Story: The lovable ghost,Bob-Part 1

Just a little story I'm writing for my friend. Input will be valued. I changed the names in order to protect certain people.

Tilly was a simple girl. She lived with her parents and her little brother on a farm. She had a job at the local gas station. The only problem was Tilly had her heart mangled in a thousand million ways. First there was Tilly's long time ex-boyfriend Miguel(who was not Spanish) Miguel started out being a good boyfriend but had changed the past couple years. He had now become well a jack ass. Then there was Bardot a boy from Iceland whois twins with Dooley, his brother. Bardot and Tilly had become lovers, or in this new time friends with benefits. Alas Bardot had recently said he was interested in other women. That broke Tilly's heart,she deeply cared for Bardot, enough that she only wanted him with her. They both ended things on friendly terms.

Still Tilly's heart yearned for love. She told her college pal Lucy that she didn't need it but even Lucy herself knew the truth because everyone needs love. Lucy was needy and narcotic but Tilly still respected her as a person.Tilly lay on her bed trying to forget about Bardot. Her father stumbled into the room.

"hey you buy my cigs yet?" he asked Tilly.

"you need a new addiction."

"haha thats what I said about Bardot." her dad smiled. She threw a pillow at his head. He left the room laughing.Tilly let out a sigh. She heard the move for a second. She thought she was going crazy. Out of the corner of eye she saw a white figure. She screamed.
"What the hell are you!?!"
The weird figure was a dashing young man. His hair blonde small yet strong body type.
"Hi I'm Bob, well Robert but I hate that name so Bob is fine. You see I'm here because my soul is unsettled untill I find my purpose my soul is unrested. Do you think you could help me miss?"
Tilly shook her head in awe.
"No this isn't happening,its just a dream!"
She ran out of the room in tears. For could anything go wrong.....

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